i just finished my second poem.

sorry
you took my hand
you said you love me
im sorry that i hurt you
really so deeply

you loved me
with all your heart
i took you as a substitute
right from the start

we held hands
your hand gave me warmth
but somehow you told me something
brought us apart more

you smiled at me
gave me winks
you were really sweet
to think i didn't cherish

one day. so suddenly
you asked if it was right
we broke up that day
i think i cried all night

i asked if we were friends
you said you hate me
you hurt me more
but never mind.. i'll let you be

now i cant say a hi
you keep avoiding my gaze
i wana talk to you again but how can i
you dont even look me in my face

im sorry that i hurt you
im sorry i didn't care
can you at least just talk to me
and don't leave a part of my heart so bare

i wana say i miss you
not alot but at least i do
if you really have to go
i wana meet you once more

gimme comments.... not here.

at my site: eternal life.

its linked here...

find it under 'other links'

find my first poem there too.

im workin on my third one.

thanksss. ^^